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Name: Azrael Deligo

Sign: Stylized Z

Title: Princess of Light

Land: Land of Light and Ice

Blood: #af1870

Fetch Modus: Backpack (items of a like group get allocated to one pouch (think Pokemon inventory))

Sprite: Dinosprite who says “Yeeeeeesss” a lot. Ridleysprite post-entry.

Lusus: Mosasaur/Sea serpent hybrid (around 80 meters in length)

Consorts: Tuataras

Strife Specibus: Scythekind

Secondary Strife Specibus: Rapierkind

Ancestor: Abaddon/The Assassin/The Infantreaper (Known as The Assassin before the war, she was granted the title of Infantreaper during the war, due to her status as a well-known killer. Her killcount as The Assassin was rumored to be thousands per year, although such hearsay was likely lowblood exaggeration.)

Denizen: Cetus

Dreamself: Derse

Trolltag: scythesShadow

Quirk: Adds Replaces the letter “s” with “Ƶ”. Uses no apostrophes. Otherwise, perfect syntax.

Age: 8.08 sweeps

Height: 5’7”

Build: Lean.

Distinguishing Personal/Physical Qualities: Alternately laid-back/excitable depending on what she is dealing with, some may call her fickle. Gets bored easily, also hasty and impatient. Normally pretty impassive in person, but has a short temper otherwise and when angry, she shows it. Gets really pissy when she doesn't get her way. Tends to have bouts of extreme rage from time to time, in which her anger consumes her. She is perfectly aware of her actions during these times, but she is nigh unreasonable as well.
Does not believe in the caste system, however she will treat landdwellers as inferiors if they don't treat her with the respect she believes she should get from them or if they ignore her, especially lowbloods. The higher up a troll is on the caste system, the more respect she'll give them, due to isolation from other trolls for the most part of her early life, as well as highblood influence. Prefers to be the leader of her FLARP team, the Cullterize Sisters.
Lives to explore; constantly in search of new discoveries. Sometimes finds fossils and other stuff that she brings back. She is also terrified of Aerona's wasp lusus, and will freeze up at the sight of it or if she is anywhere near it.

Horns: Azrael's horns come out of the sides of her head, and then curve upwards like backwards parentheses. They are also shorter and longer than Tavros's horns.

Attire: A half-sleeve shirt with her symbol on it, and a skirt with a white stripe down the front.

FLARP outfit: Her normal attire, except with a jacket like her ancestor's and a cape.

Dreamself outfit: Petticoats

Hive: Large castle-like structure built upon/from the remains of Ancestor’s lusus. The entrance to her hive is the skull of her Ancestor’s lusus, while the rest of its skeleton serves as the base for the hive. Skull is out of water and serves as the connector to the mainland. Its upper jaw can also open and close to serve as a drawbridge of sorts to keep intruders out. Interior is mostly filled with stuff from her many explorations, and is surprisingly very well organized. However, as you go into the lower levels, it progressively gets less and less organized. The bottom floors are underwater.

Land of Light and Ice: LOLAI is very bright, with icy landscapes and rays of light making colourful effects through ice prisms. The one colour that recurs most often is a light pink, in the sky and the water. It is mostly ocean, with ice islands and one big ice continent. Azrael’s hive ends up on the continents, with the underwater parts of it in the ocean.


Have anything to add or any suggestions?

Hey, you have some sort of idea for her bio don't you? You should add that and elaborate on what you've got already.

I'd say divvy up the Distinguishing Personal and Physical Qualities, so the personal stuff can be fleshed out into a bio. Maybe toss up some links for appearance and Lusus?

It'd be cool to have a little back story insight to the kinds of FLARPing Azrael got up to - maybe some old adventures? ^^

Oh no, plot.
I'm not very good with plot. ):

Well, it doesn't have to be a coherent plot. People's lives aren't really that coherent anyway. Just start with random stuff she did that you would like to do. Except as a very high-blooded troll on Alternia.

I've decided to update Azrael's info.
More under the spoiler.

Spoiler:

As I posted in irc:
Very good, but watch that contradiction I talked about. You know, this one:

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Does not believe in the caste system, however she will treat landdwellers as inferiors if they don't treat her with the respect she believes she should get from them or if they ignore her, especially lowbloods.

This is good, this particular contradiction is a realistic look at modern takes on discrimination in general, but it isn't something Azrael should hide behind forever. I think you should have overcoming this view be a part of her character arc.

Updated Azrael's stife specibi to have Rapierkind instead of Daggerkind.

Rapiers seem much for fitting for someone of her status, don't you think?

Very fitting

Updated her info etc.